This belongs as a sequel to the story in my previous post.
This is the second phase... who's to knows if it will be the last?
Looking ahead,
all she could see was
Work.
Tolling.
Ploughing.
Pacing
was the new agenda
it seemed.
Backforth.
Yesno.
It seems so.
Think.
Think...
Tink
Enormously,
an epiphany
of nothing
arrived:
"Knowledge of nothing
is the greatest yet", she thought,
for doing, without thinking, is the attitude
I should have brought!
Tools at her side,
"I'm ready"
she finally cried.
I can feel the indecision and struggle in this poem. Like a sprout reaching for the sunlight an idea germinates and grows - a new beginning.
ReplyDeleteYes, there's definitely a huge amount of indecision involved. It's like the struggle of not wanting to do something, but knowing that it has to be done.
ReplyDeletelove the poem. :)
ReplyDeletehi heart , was wondering where you have been. i now 3 posts on FOOD Jokes...just to add variety as in my blog name. wondered why you went silent.
ReplyDeleteif it makes you happy, i suggest you have another niche added to your blog, for example,you post alternate, this week your poem,next week may be on foodie or photography or travel... this way you increase your visitors. take care
Thanks for the tips Wan:) I've been really busy lately, but I'll have lots of time for blogging in November/December if all goes well. That's a good idea. Maybe I will add some variety, but will definitely work on creating more content more often.
ReplyDeleteKeep Well:)